It's taken from my home work with Mrs. Lina

Problem in the City

Dear Editor:

The city has too many people and cars. Because a lot of people are using cars, it makes the city has air pollution and traffic jam problems. The air pollution makes respiration problems and other daises with parvenu, and then the traffic jam can make some people come late to their works, school, and other people schedule, because it is making peoples spend their time on the road. So, there should be less the cars, build a subway system and also need more parking spaces to solve city’s problem.

In the city, there are not enough places to take children, because of that the children can not playing in the out door.  So, the city should build more parks to take the children. Besides, in the city has too much crime and accidents, because there are few police officers.  I suggest to the government should be hired more the police officer and traffic sign.